Comments on: Unveiling

By: Alfie

Alfie — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 13:01:36 +0000

Hey Vanae,
Check the poem out of unveiling, i hope you like it !

The Unveiling

Elite durations knocked
upon majestic thresholds of serene divinity;
offering subtle clues within the moon lit universe…
Scoping within the vast spheres of an inquisition;
thoughts roved under stellated celestial galaxies:

Are we just withering stars upon gazing moons?
Do heavenly bodies peer
into the descrying window panes
of seclusions revelation?
Or are we walking within the magnanimity
of privileged excellence?

…Knowing there is loyal sublimity
fortressing wisdom’s virtues…
An abandon surrenders into the faithful heart
like shooting stars…quickening into the stellar presence of the sky…
Evoking a calm essence within the soul of love;
unyielding echoes dance to lunar songs;
like kismets of perfection…
Within the devotional oath of honor;
Integrity stands with stately pride;
Inside this vastly expanding universe
as a peerage of solar significance
into the veranda of ennoblements…

The fealty terrace of hope…like the rising empyrean gifts of divinities
opens before the exalting privileges of enlightened deliverance…

Releasing transient doorways pledged by fate
to the worthy vestibules of love’s attenuate embrace;
dignity stands before devout honesty like a cosmic storm…
Releasing astral perceptions of existence…
Flourishing within the celestial commitments
of emotional presence
entering into the elevations of allurements…an imperial soul;
…awakening rises to the sentience of emotional unisons;
offering equanimity’s tranquil bounties
…revealing declarations of eminent trust…

Aspiring within the foundational embrace of peace
is this quietude of voluminous expression;
these silent admissions unveiling the wondrous luminaries
of your beautiful heart…

By: Vanae

Vanae — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 03:45:15 +0000

aww, thanks v’star martin.
hope you’re keeping warm in soCal.

By: Vanae

Vanae — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 03:44:52 +0000

hey v’star tom,
i feel you. when i’m not smiling or being lower-energy than usual, everyone thinks something is wrong. but forgetting what people think or say…it’s a nice relief to feel into whatever mood we are, huh?

vanae

By: Vanae

Vanae — Thu, 10 Dec 2009 03:43:37 +0000

hey aidil,
unveiling to friends and people you trust is where it’s at.

i know, i’m benefiting from doing that with my close ones as well.

vanae

By: martin

martin — Wed, 09 Dec 2009 21:59:19 +0000

wow one of your best ones ever!!! I am thinking about it…

By: Tom

Tom — Wed, 09 Dec 2009 21:57:07 +0000

I always have to be enthusiastic and high energy as the president of the Asian American Student Union at my college. It can be a bit straining at times and i’m completely 100% with you V, when you were talking about how nice it is to just be mellow. It’s so much so that when I am mellow people ask me if i’m feeling alright and i have to tell them that I’m not always high energy and that I like to just go with the flow sometimes too. Cheers to you V, and being mellow I also need to be more mellow with my dating habits but thats another story! hope all’s well~

By: Aidil FS

Aidil FS — Wed, 09 Dec 2009 09:26:53 +0000

its hard to unveil the person behind the mask..for me,its hard for me to show how vulnerable and weak i am at times… but i believe that i can just keep it to myself and wait for the ‘volcano’ to errupts…

I choose to unveil myself only to the people i care and trust..the ones that is close to me