Comments on: Game Dae Wednesdae: Piecing together a love story

By: Mark

Mark — Sat, 06 Jun 2009 20:06:49 +0000

the nearest rest area. They’ve come to a halt debating where to go. They look at each other for a few minutes which turns into an hour and the continuous comments of “Whatever you want babe”…”No, whatever you want babe” repeatedly come out, as if they were in an underground rap battle, but he finally decides, they should…

By: martin

martin — Wed, 03 Jun 2009 00:00:16 +0000

Continuity and I enjoy my sphered room but it is absolute hell trying to find the fracking door to get out of here.” Before Mr. Continuity came aboard the Battlestar Galactica his grandfather would tell him stories about his time on earth at Best Buy in the good old sphered room so he recreated it all on the hologram deck. Meanwhile back at Mrs. Roes store the wormhole shifted and our couple leave the store and get back in the car and go to……..

By: Jerome (Mrpinoy91)

Jerome (Mrpinoy91) — Tue, 02 Jun 2009 02:26:07 +0000

Gremlin….no no no…I mean he looked like a Gremlin. now before this story gets any weirder. I would like to point out my part in the story. I’m the narrator. Hello. The sadly yet happily friend who has been listening to this girl’s story every night at starbucks. Its bittersweet but i do it. If you alredy guessed; I’m just a crushee… kinda like an employee except i’m paid everytime my eyes catch hers.you know. aha. anyways this story is not as easliy readable or predictable as you may think. Because let me just say that “love” works exactly the same way.And if you think this story is going to be something that is just another “unique” love story- like they all are- let me just say you would be wrong. So back to the Gremlin. I mean the man who looked like a Gremlin; who is actually my boss down at Best Buy were I work part time… Sits in the chair in this unnaturally sphered room with no windows. “Good evening my name is Mr…

By: Reese

Reese — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 05:00:37 +0000

When they arrive at the shoty storefront in the upscale neighborhood, Mrs Roe looks at the couple with a look of hopefully remorse and invites them into the windowless back room where they are greeted by a

By: Locus

Locus — Sun, 31 May 2009 06:16:31 +0000

“Palm Reading, Care to Know?”
Without hesitations they make their way to visit Mrs.Roe, the palm reading gypsy up town…

By: Tom

Tom — Sun, 31 May 2009 05:29:43 +0000

Soaring through the air they catch a miraculous view of the coastline. Upon their descent they share a short kiss and touch down on the soft grass. They bid farewell to the diving team and thank them for a an epic dive. Together they hop in His car and head off down the 101. They catch a glimpse of a billboard that says…

By: cliboi

cliboi — Sat, 30 May 2009 21:01:09 +0000

and the jump is arranged on a beautiful clear day. JUMP, JUMP, JUMP, woohoo! the wind rushes past and a rush-of- blood-to-the head kicks in as adrenalin pumps. oddly the feeling lasts and tingles like the sweet nectar of two lovers intertwined in a pent up public frenzy. yet unable to…

By: Amberlee

Amberlee — Sat, 30 May 2009 09:13:30 +0000

If he didn’t tell her exactly how he felt, he might loose her, forever.
The words curled at the very cusp of his tongue, yearning to say the words, he couldn’t bring himself to do it,
cowardice, he backs down, and pauses, he starts to sweat, she looks at him in wonder with what she might have possibly done wrong, and takes charge, not thinking about how he may feel, or how he may react, she looks him directly in the eyes, with a lustful glare, and in a sultry voice whispers “i love you, i can’t live without you”.
He then grabs her supple pale cheeks of nervousness and kisses her, she can’t help but to kiss him back.
without paying attention, she dropped her dark berry mocha, and it splashes upon is ironed clean pants, shocking him, breaking up the kiss, she feels terrible, and wonders if he feels the same, or if he is going to use her, he looks up with a painful look from the cold beverage that had been spilled upon him, and says the words, “i’ve always loved you, since the day i met you.”
she begins to blush, and cool down to reality from her exciting moment, and they left the restaurant forgetting to pay the bill. As they walked out and into the rest of the mall, they conversed about what they both were really like, her clumsy, goofy, and loved to have fun, yet a nerd and enjoyed learning, him, fun and clumsy as well, he loved to take adventures, and had always dreamed of sky diving, and he was intelligent, they had more in common then they both imagined, so they decided to go on a date, to go skydiving together…

By: Marc

Marc — Fri, 29 May 2009 22:50:12 +0000

unspeakable silence between the two budding lovers, the waitress turns to another table. “So dark berry mocha huh?” he said. Blushing away from his gaze, she replies “yeah, it’s my favorite.” Silence follows until it was broken by a clattering of empty coffee mugs from an adjacent table. He knows he must act now or lose her forever. The first thing that came to his mind was……….

By: Casey(:

Casey(: — Fri, 29 May 2009 17:03:34 +0000

When they started the speak, the sky is darken and it rain, they both didn’t bring an umbrella so they both rushes into a mall and continue their conversation in a coffee shop. They both realized they ordered the same drink, dark berry mocha, they start drinking and as they speak, the waitress come and ….